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Thursday, 20 August 2020

100 Word Challenge - Week 4 + 5

100 Word Challenge


Under the stars,  the galaxy sky,  there is an alien just staring into space.  He's on a rock and his name is Rocky,  That's his home under the stars.  He lives in different places all the time but this is the most frequent one.  The galaxy is super pretty; it reminds me of the milky way chocolates.  That's probably because on the packaging it's made to look like the Milky Way.  Fun fact: Earth is a small part of the Milky Way Galaxy. This alien is 204 years old in alien years and 40 human years. He's always very lonely.


What did you think of my story about the galaxy, alien and Milky Way ?

What is some tips I could use for next time ?

1 comment:

  1. Ka pai, Kirsty!

    I love the piece of creative writing you've done this week and how you linked what you saw in the photo to Milky Way chocolates. That's an interesting comparison! I would love to know what you would have written if the story could have kept going.

    - Miss Birtch

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