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Tuesday 4 August 2020

200 Word Challenge ~ Day 2

200 Word Challenge 


4/8/20

The music sounds like one of those ballet barbies that turn in a music box,  It reminds me of calming but weird music.  It sounds like music my old school would put on for the class.  This kind of music seems like ballroom dancing.  I wouldn't listen to this music but for this task I did. The video is nice cause it's got feathers and it seems to remind me of birds.  This week's challenge was to do a story between 100 and 200 words and I got 117 words.  I think these storeys are really fun and I'm going to challenge myself to do one every day of the week.




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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 August 2020 at 09:03

    Hello Kirsty it is me Lacie.
    I enjoyed reading your story about the music.
    I think that you had some really good ideas in the writing.
    Maybe next time you could add more detail about the music to your blog post but it was really good anyways.

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  2. Anonymous6 August 2020 at 09:06

    Kia Ora Kirsty,
    I really enjoyed reading your story. I like how you described the music.
    It reminded me of when I used to do ballet.

    - Shelby

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