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Tuesday 26 September 2017

This Story Is Insane!

Hey everyone im back!!!!
So I did a story in writing about hyperbole and this is what turned out to look it


Once upon a time there was a dog named Milo. Milo was as fast as a ford and as strong as a mice. One day Milo was so hungry he could eat a rhino, so he went to find himself something to eat. Milo had an amazing sense of smell near him. It was so far he could almost smell it! He searched for years but couldn’t find it. Suddenly, a man as tall as the beehive walked passed him eating a chicken leg. Milo drooled so much it was like a river flowing from his mouth! The man laughed, pet Milo on the head and handed him the bone. Milo was so happy he could time travel !!!


By Kirsty

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