So hi I'm Kirsty and today I am going to show you the way to get fish tickets at school(Gilberthorpe) so I will be having a slide to show you. Here it is
Wednesday, 22 March 2017
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Hi Kirsty its Sita here!
ReplyDeleteI really like all of the things you have added in its really helpful for other people! I also liked how you numbered it of to make it look way more interesting! I was just wondering, are there any other ways you could get fish tickets? You should totally add in all the fish tickets so other people from other school know what they look like and if you get one they know the reason why we got one! There is one more thing, your slides are really big so its going of all of the stuff on the side so you might want to try and change that. Other than that keep up the GREAT work!!!
Bye!
Hi Kirsty, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kirsty for telling me how to get fish tickets that is really helpful.
Maybe next time you could look back and reread to get your spelling correct?