The Lost Gold
One sunny afternoon, We went on a hike up the hills. We went up and down trails to find what we were trying to find. But instead of finding a pond to fish at we found a treasure chest. The treasure chest needed a key and we got our nana and grandad to look after the treasure chest well we went and tried to find the key. We look every single place it could be, but It was not there. We even found a pond looking for the key but still no key was found. We went back to nana and grandad and they said “Does anyone have a “bobby pin” but everyone said no. We went back to grandad and nana’s house with the treasure chest. We looked up and down for a bobby pin, But still none was found. At around 6 pm when they were having dinner their mum shouted “I FOUND A BOBBY PIN” everyone rushed into the spare room to see it. She wasn't lying, They got the bobby pin and twisted it so much is the lock that it …. TO BE CONTINUED
Anyway my time is up and i have to sit on the mat, bye for now.
Hey Kirsty, Its Sharney here, Your story was so interesting I would love to hear more about your story, Do you know why your story wasnt on your blog properly?
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Hey Sharney, Kirsty here. Thank you for your lovely comment, I will definitely make a part two. I don't know why it is like that, I will ask Miss Raisin and see if she'll help me. Can you do a story like this? Anyway I have to go, Bye
DeleteHey Kirsty, Heres a link to my blog I did a blog post on my writing about giraffes, You should check it out
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