Team discusses Ideas for the story.
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Not enough writing
When the three bears go upstairs… they push her off the bed, then she runs as far a way as possible
The bears came in and went up and saw her so they gobbled her up
They came running in and gobbled her up
Just before she lays in baby bears bed the three bears come in and be angry but she made friends with them instead
She could see them from 15 feet away, she runs upstairs and hides in a small box. The bears came in and didn’t notice anything, they went up stairs and went for a nap. When they were asleep she ran for her life and was never seen again.
Anyway I hoped you liked it, I will post later. bye
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